Rahul rushed to the room to see the Paramedics laying Madhav on the stretcher.
What happened? He couldn’t believe his own eyes for what they saw! He is bewildered and scared, to see Madhav, lying lifeless. Tears start to flow from his eyes, he can’t control himself!
Oh, No! How did this happen? Everything was spinning in front of him.
With great effort, he asks, “Can you find his pulse?” “Is he ok”? He was scared to death to see his childhood friend in this state.
It’s feeble, we need to rush him to the hospital. Please follow us, the paramedics instructed.
Rahul tried to compose himself with great difficulty. He has to do this. He has to be strong today. He has to take care of Uncle, Radhika, and kids. They depend on him. Madhav has stood by him always. But his legs are giving away. He needs support, he is unable to stand. He can’t see his friend like this. He can’t lose him. Rahul says a silent prayer. Today God will have to listen to him. Madhav is his only family.
As Madhav is wheeled into the ICU, Radhika and Rahul wait outside with bated breath, crying, praying ….
Will Radhika’s insecurities, worries come true? We wait with bated breath, too!
To be continued…
Read my previous posts in this series :
#1: Patterns Disturbing Pattern Of Life !
#2: Nostalgic: Reminiscing Fond Memories Over A Cup of Coffee
#3: Terminal : Is it the end?
I am taking part in The Write Tribe Problogger October 2017 Blogging Challenge. #4: Bated Breath
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You’re doing a fine job of keeping us hanging, Aesha.
Thanks Corinne for reading
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Im waiting with a bated breath too. Home he is fine
Hope so
A good take on the prompt.. waiting for the nest part.. 🙂
Thanks for reading Swati and liking it
Oh god! hope everything turns out well for them!
Thanks for reading
I hope everything turns out ok and I’m really liking the way Madhav’s character is developing.
Thanks for reading Mahak
You are making us wait with bated breath too. I’m so hooked.
Thanks Apeksha. Means a lot
Damn, why do you do this? 😐
As we need to wait with Bated Breath
Good that Madhav has a supportive friend like Rahul. Good use of the prompt incorporated into your stories 🙂
Thanks Prasanna
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interesting as ever! Guess need to wait with a bated breath to know what’s coming next in this story!
Yes I guess so Keerthi. Thanks a lot for reading
I so hope he gets well and comes home!
Hopefully…
Getting very interesting. Hope Madhav recovers. Great use of the prompts, Aesha.
Thanks a lot Sreedeep. I hope Madhav recovers soon too
Continues to be interesting. 🙂 Like how you’re going to the prompts, and also keeping your readers at the edge of their seat.
Thanks Vinay. I hope can live up to the expectations of my readers.
Rahul’s prayers must come true. We want to read Madhav coming home happily.
Hope so too
The story so far is so intriguing and has me on tenterhooks. Can’t wait to see what happens next…
Great piece of fiction!
Thanks Priya
Oh no the wait is terrible!!! Hope things work out well in the end!
I hope he will be fine soon. Good going, Aesha.
Thanks Shalini!!
Hopefully Madhav will get better and we all can breathe a sigh of relief!
I hope so too
Some story… Can’t wait to see what happens next.
I hope he gets ok… I’m hopeful!
I hope he will be ok – another long wait Aesha. Very mean you are ?
I am hopeful too … ?. Just following the prompts !