Madhav could hear some faint voices. Where was he? He wondered. Who are all these people whispering around him?
Was he with Dadaji teaching Raju, he thought as flashes from his childhood, crossed his mind. No, he could now see himself at the office chatting and joking with his friends.
Oh yes, I am with my friends. I am sure. They are whispering something about me, look at them. But what is this sound of beeps in the background? He wondered.
As he tries to open his eyes he sees blur images of people in white coats. What are these people talking about and why can’t I move my right hand, he wonders perplexed.
Slowly he opens his eyes, to find himself in a hospital room. How many days have I been here, he asks. He can’t see his family around him but then he sees Rahul. His eyes are moist and he can see him sitting beside him with his hand in his, but he cant feel his touch!
The shocking reality hits him like an arrow. Indeed there is something wrong with him. Unable to contain his emotions, he starts shouting hysterically and tries desperately to move his arms and legs but to no avail.
Don’t worry Madhav, Rahul assures him.
This is not your destiny? I defy it, I defy it….
To be continued…
Click on the link below to read about what happened earlier in the story
#1: Disturbing Pattern Of Life !
#2: Reminiscing Fond Memories Over A Cup of Coffee
#4: As They Wait With Bated Breath
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#5 Prompt: Disobedience
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Such a beautiful post?? loved each and every line of it. Would be glad if you check out my new post on acceptance:
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He will overcome it won’t he?
I hope so
I’m glad he’s’ chosen to fight whatever it is that is ailing him….
Yes Corinne
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Oh, hope he isn’t paralyzed or anything. Defying destiny, that’s interesting. Hope Madhav recovers.
Thanks for Sreedeep. Hope for the best
Oh no! Is he paralysed? Please reveal the suspense.
Keep reading Shalz
OMG! That’s a paralysis is it? Wonder how would his family be feeling right now and his friend rahul as well. Hope to see it goes well in the next post.
Thanks for reading Keerthi! Hope so too
Oh no! What has happened to him? He’ll need loads of courage and support for this challenge!
That’s a cliffhanger right there and i cannot wait to read what happens next!
Thanks for reading Veens. Keep reading
oh oh sounds like paralysis – waiting to see how this turns out!!
Thanks for visiting and reading my post Shalini
I too, like many before me, root for Madhav to overcome odds. Waiting for next week…
Thanks for reading Vinay
I’m rooting for Madhav to overcome whatever is happening to him. Very gripping.
Thanks Apeksha. Keep visiting and reading my posts
Oh Gosh, goosebumps plus reminded me of Ghajini 😐
Missed some early parts. Read and updated. Can’t wait to see what’s happening and hoping that Radhika’s fear is not going to be true.
Thanks Sheethal for reading.
Oh Gosh, is he paralyzed. I hope Madhav has the strength to overcome this. Keep writing 🙂
Thanks for reading Prasanna. Keep reading ..
This is not your destiny.. loved that line. Can’t wait for part 2 of this.
Thanks a lot
Only when we have the courage to defy our destiny, do we have the courage to make our own! Can’t wait to see how Madhav copes.
Thanks Priya for reading